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"Quite Good With Some Potential Reaking from it."
Your animation was reasonable. You need to work on walking animations as one of his legs was trailing higher than the other. Also don't take the easy way out of door opening and closing animations. Animate them fully opening; it looks a great deal better.
Next time make it longer and funnier. I see the joke was that the fridge light out of everything got him noticed. Make up something much more funny. Such as . . Well im not going to tell you as I may make it into a movie ^_^
You have great potential.
Author's Response:
Well, the actual joke was that the fridge light blinded him, since he was wearing night vision goggles. And when intensive light shines in your eyes while wearing it, it hurts your eyes badly... I was affraid not everyone would understand that. Like Tiewaz said (he responded after you) it's not really clear.
But anyway, thanks for the credits...
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Excellent Animation. Much better than the first one because:
There were More angles.
Better animation (as said above)
More characters
More Multi Animation
Triple Front flip chair land slide punch phone computer kick move! (Up, left, down Low kick)
Really good and i am looking forward to the next DAD.
Of which is `Dad Goes Overtime`
Keep It up!
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Very Good animation. You made almost everything funny. The voices werent completely English but were still amazingly good!
Keep it Up and if you need an English Voice actor i may have to start =O
Anyway, Make more. Make them even better!
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Quite funny with an interesting plot. The story wasn't actually that original but it hasn't been done many times before and this is one of the best. You need to work on the lip syncing as when he was singing his mouth was just a 2 or 3 frame animation. If you made it so he spoke the words better then i would score a lot higher.
If you have trouble working out what shape their mouth should be while they sound out each letter then look for a lip syncing tutorial or even better look in a mirror and say the words.
Good work and effort keep it up.
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Good Animation and song. I would agree with you throughout the entire song. . .
No matter how many new consoles and games they bring out it is most likely still going to suck.
I will probably get an Xbox 360 as you say its much better. I would have more fun playing a Nintendo 64 then a PS3. . .
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Animation and art was great along with the sound and such. Very good series.
Only problem is that the end was quite rubbish. The evil guy had all that power and then he just died for some stupid reason that he touched a sword and suddenly lost all of his immortal powers and couldn't do anything about having his head chopped off. . .
I think you rushed the ending and it was a bit of a let down.
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HAHAHAHAHAH!
That has got to be one of the funniest things i haver ever seen!
Good job and translate some more weird lyrics - Like the theme tunes from the Hitman Games?!
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Your movies are a decent length long and contain very good graphics and blurs and so on. One thing i though was odd was that at the end of file 1 he said "I wont do it again (meaning he wont kill anyone again)" but then he goes and kills a load more people when really he could of neutralized them without killing.
That was a small plot fault and the last problem was how he ran. It looked quite odd and you should work on it. Its best to look in a mirror and do whatever action and then you can copy how you did it. Many lip-syncers do this and copy what shape their mouth is.
Otherwise it was a great movie better than the first one. Don't ignore this advice as others think they are still quite good from other reviews and then realise in later movies that no-one likes it because they havent improved. This could prove a great series. Good work and Good luck.
Author's Response:
I'll explain that more next time, I meant it as in he wouldnt kill innocent people for no reason again. He was taught only to kill bad people, and then he find the people he works for the be bad people.
I take all the advice given to me into consideration, and I appriciate it, so thanks!
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Your animation has greatly improved since the last episode and i like how blockhead is a bit more intelligent but well err >_> ok he isn't any more intelligent.
New art was great. The use of stop sign kind of dug up from an earlier episode was brilliant.
You have set yourself a hard target for the next episode but i'm sure it will be better.
w00t blockhead!
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It was great, scary and sometimes hard to watch but you know when to stop so you don't entirely makes us build a mountain of excretion!
I cried at the little boy with big eyes at the end ;(
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