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"Quite Good With Some Potential Reaking from it."
Your animation was reasonable. You need to work on walking animations as one of his legs was trailing higher than the other. Also don't take the easy way out of door opening and closing animations. Animate them fully opening; it looks a great deal better.
Next time make it longer and funnier. I see the joke was that the fridge light out of everything got him noticed. Make up something much more funny. Such as . . Well im not going to tell you as I may make it into a movie ^_^
You have great potential.
Author's Response:
Well, the actual joke was that the fridge light blinded him, since he was wearing night vision goggles. And when intensive light shines in your eyes while wearing it, it hurts your eyes badly... I was affraid not everyone would understand that. Like Tiewaz said (he responded after you) it's not really clear.
But anyway, thanks for the credits...
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Excellent Animation. Much better than the first one because:
There were More angles.
Better animation (as said above)
More characters
More Multi Animation
Triple Front flip chair land slide punch phone computer kick move! (Up, left, down Low kick)
Really good and i am looking forward to the next DAD.
Of which is `Dad Goes Overtime`
Keep It up!
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Very Good animation. You made almost everything funny. The voices werent completely English but were still amazingly good!
Keep it Up and if you need an English Voice actor i may have to start =O
Anyway, Make more. Make them even better!
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